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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram delineates the information about how the number of solar
panels
 can be used for the production of
electricity
, which is used for domestic purposes. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that there are five different
equipements
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equipment
 that are required for the production of solar energy, that are solar
panels
,
inverter
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inverters
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, electrical
panel
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panels
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,
utility
meter
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meters
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 and
utility
grid
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grids
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.
Initially
, the solar
panels
 are used for receiving the sunlight which can be
further
 converted into DC current. To convert
this
 DC current into AC current, an
inverter
 is used. The
inverter
 not only
help
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helps
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 in conversion
,
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, but
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it
also
 controls the
electricity
 and the amount that
need
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needs
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 to be produced. After
inverter
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the inverter
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, an electric panel is used which is for distributing the
electricity
 for
the
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domestic purposes. After that
utility
 meter is consumed which
help
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helps
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 in
the
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transferring any excess solar
electricity
 present to the grid with the help of the metre. After
utility
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the utility
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 metre, the
utility
 grid is used, which is used for providing
the
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electricity
 when the
electricity
 you
used is exceeded
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use exceeds
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 the amount of
the
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electricity
 which is produced by solar
panels
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, electricity, inverter, utility with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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