You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph underneath compares the textbooks read by both
the
sexes during the span of three years, Correct article usage
apply
that is
from 2011 to 2014 at Burnaby Public Library. The values are expressed in thousands.
Overall
, in the beginning
females were more interested in book reading than males. The books read by men rose significantly over the course of the timeline Add a comma
beginning,
whereas
readings by women steadily inclined in the intial
years before crashing down by the end.
In 2011, around 3,000 books were read by men, Correct your spelling
initial
after
this
the value Add a comma
this,
incremented
marginally to 4,000 by the next year. The number of readings shot up to 10,000 books in the next twelve months and the numerals continued to rise Verb problem
increased
further
up till
14,000 by the end of the timeline.
Change preposition
to
Womens
Correct your spelling
Women
on the other hand
read approximately 5,000 textbooks, after
this
the value inclined steadily to 10,000 readings by the fall of 2013. The numbers plummeted Add a comma
this,
down
drastically to around 7,000 by 2014.Change preposition
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this".
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