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There is a traffic problem in your area. Write a letter to the council. Describe the traffic problem What is the reason behind this What should be done foe this

#traffic #area #council #reason #foe
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Dear sir, I am Gurpreet Singh a resident of Abdullapur Chuhane district Sangrur.
Iam
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I am
 writing
this
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 letter to
council
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the council
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 about the
traffic
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 issues in my hometown. To commence with, In
temporary
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the temporary
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era
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era,
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 there are so many
traffic
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 problems like
as
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apply
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noise pollution and waste of
the
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apply
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fuel . We see in every city in
traffic
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 jams during
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this
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these
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 issues people blow the horn
for
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to
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 save
the
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apply
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time so that noise pollution is increasing
as well as
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 brain stress problems.
Secondly
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, most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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youngsters prefer fuel vehicles
go
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to go
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one
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from one
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 place to another place.it is
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a totally
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totally
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total
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 waste of money and they can not save money.
Furthermore
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, the major reason
of
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for
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 the
traffic
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 issue is road space. In big
cities
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cities,
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 tool taxes are available so that people use single roads as compared
highways
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to highways
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.
In addition
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, the
increaseing
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increasing
 number of stray animals are roads
aslo
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also
 the reason behind
traffic
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congestions
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congestion
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.
Government
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The government
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 should
be
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apply
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cut down hafty
tooltax
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tools
from
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on
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highway
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highways
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then
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masses
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the masses
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 prefer more space
roads
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on roads
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 and
traffic
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 lights provided by authorities on every road if
that
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apply
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people follow these
light
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lights
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and
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apply
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traffic
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 jams would
be reduce
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be reduced
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 automatically.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully, Gurpreet
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task response
Ensure that all the required points are addressed in the letter.
coherence cohesion
Improve the coherence and cohesion by organizing the information in a more logical manner and using appropriate linking words.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more precise words to convey your ideas.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity and accuracy.
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