The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1
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The bar chart illustrates the drinking habits of tea,
coffee
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purchase and consumption in 4 weeks within
five
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cities
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in Australia. The details are obtained
as a consequence
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of the survey done in
five
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cities
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within four weeks. Details are given as percentages.
Overall
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, It can be seen going to
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cafes
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cafe
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cafes
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for tea and
coffee
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shows the highest trend in the period of all the given
cities
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in Australia.
While
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purchasing instant
coffee
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is trending second and least on is fresh
coffee
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consumption.
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considering the most buying or drinking people going to a cafe is most popular in Australia relevant
cities
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. Among the
five
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cities
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Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney consumers tend to go
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to cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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and have tea or
coffee
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more than 60%
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others to just about 55% and about 50% respectively( Brisbane, Adelaide). The second most obtained drink is instant
coffee
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it is just between 55% and 45% most about 55% least 45% Hobart and Adelaide The least purchased item is fresh
coffee
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within the given period. All are just under 45% in the
five
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cities
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. Among these Sydney is the most about 45% and minimum consumption shows Brisbane as almost 35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, five, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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