The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1
The bar chart illustrates the drinking habits of tea,
coffee
purchase and consumption in 4 weeks within
five
cities
in Australia. The details are obtained
as a consequence
of the survey done in
five
cities
within four weeks. Details are given as percentages.
Overall
, It can be seen going to
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cafes
show examples
cafe
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cafes
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for tea and
coffee
shows the highest trend in the period of all the given
cities
in Australia.
While
purchasing instant
coffee
is trending second and least on is fresh
coffee
consumption.
While
considering the most buying or drinking people going to a cafe is most popular in Australia relevant
cities
. Among the
five
cities
Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney consumers tend to go
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to cafe
show examples
cafe
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cafes
show examples
and have tea or
coffee
more than 60%
while
others to just about 55% and about 50% respectively( Brisbane, Adelaide). The second most obtained drink is instant
coffee
it is just between 55% and 45% most about 55% least 45% Hobart and Adelaide The least purchased item is fresh
coffee
within the given period. All are just under 45% in the
five
cities
. Among these Sydney is the most about 45% and minimum consumption shows Brisbane as almost 35%.
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