Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or diagree with this statement?

The government's policy blueprint always catches the public attention,

in particular

about

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the budgeting exercises of different

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. Because of

this

, a discussion on

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transportation

plan has

provoked

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- whether our government should allocate extra money to rail systems

instead

of

roads

.

Roads

indeed facilitate our daily activities as they enhance accessibility and mobility to various locations where railways are too massive and complicated to reach.

For example

, trains may not be able to navigate in

the

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Angkor Wat when the ancient

architectures

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are

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too fragile to withstand the station construction and the vibration

they

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bring

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. In

this

regards

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, pathways that induce

less

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nuisanes

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nuisances

nuisance

to the environment prevail.

Nonetheless

,

this

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only accounts for a minority of the urban landscapes. At the same time, we already have more than enough

roads

within our developed cities.

Therefore

, introducing railways into our existing urban design exhibits numerous benefits to not only the living environment but

also

the natural resources.

Firstly

, trains and trams are usually powered by electricity.

Therefore

, the operation limits

atmosperic

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atmospheric

pollutants emitted to the nearby

neighborhood

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. Apart from that, it assists the

govenment

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government

in fulfilling its climate pledge by hugely limiting per capita greenhouse gas

emission

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through

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transporting the huge crowd

or

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goods at once.

Lastly

, the efficiency it brings

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one of our tricky urban problems - the traffic jam. In conclusion, I largely agree with the proposal on implanting more rail infrastructures than

roads

within our city. When our cosmopolitan cities are already penetrated by a lot of

roads

,

while

their transportation efficiency

are

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relatively low, railways should be

more

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prioritized to build a more civilized place for all walks of life.