You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution.

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Dear Mr Jacob, I am writing you

this

letter to complain about the new

neighbors

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who recently took the apartment above me

aon

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losdale

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Lonsdale

street. I don’t like to complain, but the

last

two weeks have been a struggle. The new tenant has four young children, twin daughters and two toddlers and they seem to be allowed to run, yell and scream at all hours. The situation

also

worsens because they

also

adopted two dogs which are not trained, they park day and night. Because I am a software developer, I spend a lot of time at home working, and

this

is making my life difficult. It is hard for me to concentrate during my work, there is always noise in the background during my meetings which prevents me from hearing my boss

not to mention

that is

highly unprofessional. I am concerned that lose my job if

this

disturbance continues. I spoke with the tenant regarding

this

issue but to no avail, since you are the landlord, I would like you to remind them of the contract agreements , particularly about the noise and pets.

Also

, I would suggest that you consider carpeting that apartment.

This

would help tremendously with the sound of paws and feet. I look forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours sincerely, Yara mu

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Task Response

Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt, such as explaining the situation, describing why it bothers you, and suggesting a solution.

Coherence and Cohesion

Organize your ideas in a clear and logical manner. Consider using paragraphs to separate different aspects of the issue.

Lexical Resource

Expand your range of vocabulary and use more varied and precise words to express your thoughts.

Grammatical Range

Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to ensure accurate and effective communication.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

220 words

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