The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie
chart
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illustrates some principal causes that contribute to the degradation of the
land
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and the table demonstrates the negative effects on the three continents during the 1990s. All units were shown in percentage.
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, the majority of
land
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in the pie
chart
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was degraded by over-grazing and
deforestation
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. In the table, the highest proportion of
land
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being destroyed was in Europe and the opposite was true for North America. Looking at the pie
chart
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, the main reason for the degradation of the
land
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was over-grazing, which was the biggest number in the
chart
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, 35%.
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that, a third of less productive agricultural
land
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was the consequence of
deforestation
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, which was higher than over-cultivation, 29%. The final figure was other factors, the lowest part in the
chart
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, 7% of all. Concerning the table, Europe had the highest proportion of
land
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degraded, 23% which contained the majority of
deforestation
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, 9%, 7.7% of over-cultivation and 5.5% in over-grazing fields. Looking at Oceania, it had the majority of effects caused by over-grazing, 13%, and just owned 1.7% of
deforestation
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. The region had the lowest of
land
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degraded, 5%, North America was affected primarily by over-cultivation, accounting for 3.3%,
besides
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that it had 0.2%
deforestation
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and 1.5 of over-grazing too.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, land, deforestation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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