IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

The line graph shows the percentage of tourists who visited Brighton attractions between 1980 and 2010 in England.

Overall

,it is evident from the chart, that there was a downward slope in the proportion of tourists who went to the Festival and Art Gallery.

In Contrast

,there was an upward trend in the number of people who visited the Pavilion and Pier over the years.

To begin

with,Art Gallery and Pier stood at 21% and 10% respectively.

Then

,it rose slightly to 38% and 15% in 1985 before witnessing

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between 1990 and 2000.

Also

,there was an intersection between both at 15% in 2005

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and was at 22% in Pier and 8% in Art gallery which was the least by the end of the period.

Furthermore

,Festival topped the

year

in 1980 at 30%

while

Pavilion was the second highest at 22% in the same

year

.In the

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year

,there was a clash in the figure at 28% in 1985.But,

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evened out till the

year

of the

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and Pavilion witnessed variations before hitting the top of the chart at 30% by 2010.