The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The following chart represents how frequently individuals in the USA, consumed fast
food
during the years 2003 to 2013.
As a whole, the percentage of people eating Use synonyms
this
kind of Linking Words
food
every day or not at all is less than 5, throughout the years. The highest consumption of Use synonyms
this
kind of Linking Words
food
is once a week in all years, and its peak Use synonyms
is
in 2006 Wrong verb form
was
with
more than 30 Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
percent
.
The number of people eating fast Change the spelling
per cent
food
once a week, once or twice a month is approximately equal Use synonyms
with
about 30 Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Additionally
, 15 Linking Words
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percent
of individuals Change the spelling
per cent
eat
a few times a year in 2006 and 2013.
The highest proportion of Wrong verb form
ate
crowd
, who had several times a week belongs to the year 2006, with 20 Correct article usage
the crowd
Use synonyms
percent
. 17 and 16 Change the spelling
per cent
percents
of people Fix the agreement mistake
percent
have eaten
Wrong verb form
ate
as
Change preposition
at
aforementioned
times, in 2003, and 2013 respectively.
The apex of rates in 2013, goes back to Correct article usage
the aforementioned
consumption
of fast Add an article
the consumption
food
once or twice a month.Use synonyms
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