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Many governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Disscuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Economic
progress
 is prioritized by many governments
whereas
 a group of people think that other
types
 of
progress
 are as important as economic
progress
. I agree with the thinking of the governments. Economic
progress
 is the key factor for
development
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the development
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 of a
country
. It is impossible to start different developmental programs without achieving economic upliftment. The
country
 which
want
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 to see
themselves
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itself
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in
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on
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 the road of
progress
they
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apply
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must improve
their
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its
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 economic situation. The GDP, GNP, Per capita income etc. all are connected with economic inclinement. As a matter of fact, We can
get here
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 Bangladesh as an example. Here,
the
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structural
development
 is seen everywhere but there is a lack of economic
progress
 so
that
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It's losing reserve money and taking loans from different international
development
 organizations under certain rules and regulations. So, all
types
 of
progress
 are not very good
factor
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 but the growth in
economic
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the economic
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 sector is.
On the other hand
, It will be possible to do other kinds of
development
 If the economic
development
 is steady.
Besides
, a fragile economy can not play a vital role in any sector of.improvement.
Additionally
, If other
types
 of
progress
 are prioritized like economic
development
, the economy will face a decline as It won't get the priority It should get.
Moreover
,
economy
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the economy
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 is
the
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 major part of
development
. If the economic situation is about to fall, nobody or no other
country
 will be eager to give a loan for improvement as there is a risk
this
 big amount will be repaid later. In conclusion, I want to stand with the thinking of many governments as I get that the whole
development
 of a
country
 depends on
the
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good economic achievement and situation.
In Addition
, other
types
 of
progress
 are directly connected with it.
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