The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
The maps represent information about the present and the future
plane
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plan
will
be Correct pronoun usage
that will
renovated
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to renovate
in
2024 Change preposition
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of
the village called Farmshire.
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in
Overall
, it can be seen that the city will be constructing the
three main things Correct article usage
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are
a shopping Centre,a community football field and employment assistance.
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To begin
with, the
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in the
town
in
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at
the
present, there have village shop near to the road and is in the south of the farmshire. Next,there have woods area in the north of the Correct article usage
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town
and beside the farmhouses.
For future development,the town
will have employment assistance ,and they will remove the town
store.In addition
, they will be cutting woods place
and they will be building a community of football. And the big change in 2024 will be a big supermarket.
So, the city will be developing more facilities because they will be changed into a big Fix the agreement mistake
wood places
town
,and they need people who live in the province to have a good life.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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