Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The impact

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human beings is enormous.The primary

causes

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of loss of bio variability is

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human

actions

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serious

problems

have arisen

as a result

of

this

,there are some solutions One of the first

problems

of the human

actions

is

pollution

.

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throw out the bad substances in the water and water

pollution

is a major issue. Many industries dump

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into rivers, lakes, ponds, and streams in an attempt to hide

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from inspectors. These water sources feed major crops and food becomes contaminated with a variety of chemicals and bacteria, causing rampant health

problems

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this

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has

a negative

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a negative affect

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affects

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on the planet.Another major problem is

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illegal haunting.These days,there are constant news stories about

an illegal hunters

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illegal hunters

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and killed animals,resulting

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is

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a possible extinction of animal species which

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on

bio resources

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bioresources

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It’s important,that action is taken to combat these

problems

.Governments should

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tighten the law and introduce more controls for the haunting.Big companies should support special organisations that work to protect animals.It can be a way to make a positive impact

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a

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bio diversity

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biodiversity

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pollution

problem,people should start from themselves. The easiest

ways

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to solution for air

pollution

is to move away from fossil fuels, replacing them with alternative energies like solar, wind and geothermal.

Also

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governments should check the companies and fabrics more properly.

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,the influence of human beings on the planet is awful and

people

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actions

kill the planet

everyday

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,but these

problems

have a solution.

However

,with the right

actions

by the government and the public educating about the importance of preserving wildlife and

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impact of cars

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etc,can be made a future brighter