The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

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The illustration underneath compares the layout plan as of today and in 2024 of the village of Bunborough after its

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redevelopment

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, the area is divided into two sections by a main road which will remain as it is in future

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supermarket

, a community soccer field and an employment assistance centre will be built for the citizens in the upcoming layout plan. On the

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side of the road lie three farms in an inverted L manner , the one near the path is projected to be converted

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a poultry farm. The forest area located on the east side of the agricultural setting will be replaced by a new community soccer field by 2024. A village store situated

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the south-west area will be demolished and an employment assistance centre shall be erected

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its place. The tree plantations present adjacent to the grocery shop will be cut down to a minimum and a supermarket is going to be built located north

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it adjacent to the main road. The cooperative bank and prayer centre are to be left untouched as per the plan.

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