The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

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The illustration underneath compares the layout plan as of today and in 2024 of the village of Bunborough after its

redevelopement

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redevelopment

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, the area is divided into two sections by a main road which will remain as it is in future

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, a community soccer field and an employment assistance centre will be built for the citizens in the upcoming layout plan. On the

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side of the road lie three farms in an inverted L manner , the one near the path is projected to be converted

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a poultry farm. The forest area located on the east side of the agricultural setting will be replaced by a new community soccer field by 2024. A village store situated

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the south-west area will be demolished and an employment assistance centre shall be erected

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its place. The tree plantations present adjacent to the grocery shop will be cut down to a minimum and a supermarket is going to be built located north

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it adjacent to the main road. The cooperative bank and prayer centre are to be left untouched as per the plan.

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The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems? What measures could be taken to solve them.

Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In over to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviors. Do you agree or disagree.

Entertainment such as playing electronic games on portable devices will be harmful to individuals in the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?