The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart represents the percentage of
tourists
at a particular holiday resort in Australia taken place. And it includes different activities.
Overall
, there was tourist
Add an article
a tourist
by
4 different Change preposition
from
region
of origin namely, Asia, Europe, Change to a plural noun
regions
US
, and Other.
Asian Correct article usage
the US
tourists
stayed
for about 7 Wrong verb form
stay
days
in a most popular 5-star hotel accomadations
and their main activity is sightseeing. European Correct your spelling
accommodation
tourists
stayed for longer days
than the others by 16 days
. They took their accomadation
in camping or caravan. European Correct your spelling
accommodation
people
main purpose is to swim or Change noun form
people's
sunbathing
. American Wrong verb form
sunbathe
tourists
main activity is Change noun form
tourist's
tourists'
same
as Correct article usage
the same
the
Correct determiner usage
that
Asian
Change preposition
of Asian
tourists
. US people
average length of stay is about 14 Change noun form
people's
days
and they choose 4-star
Add an article
a 4-star
the 4-star
hotel
for their Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
accomadation
. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Tourists
from other regions stay was
for 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
days
and they decided to accomadate
as same as the Europeans. Surfing is considered to be the main activity for the other Correct your spelling
accommodate
region
people.
Change noun form
region's
Therefore
, European tourists
period of stay Change noun form
tourist's
tourists'
is
the highest and the least Wrong verb form
was
was
Asian Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tourists
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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