The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
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The first
maps
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map
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depicts the main
road
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of the village of Bunborough today and the second
one
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is a representation of how it will look in 2024.
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, green areas will be
destroied
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destroyed
to create space for new buildings and entertainment venues. As shown at the top of the map, in 2024
one
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of the
farm
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on the left of the main
road
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will be turned into a poultry
one
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, causing the logging of green areas nearby. The wood area will be demolished and turned into a community soccer field. The right side of the main
road
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will undergo changes too. The prayer
center
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and the cooperative bank will remain the same,
meanwhile
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even more green areas will be
destroied
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destroyed
to build a new supermarket just by the
road
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. The building that today is used as
village
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a village
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store will be turned into a bigger
one
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and become an employment assistance.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • village
  • present day
  • plans
  • 2024
  • overview
  • key differences
  • road network
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • recreational spaces
  • impact
  • environment
  • benefits
  • challenges
  • proposed changes
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