On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter ● describe the item you lost ● explain how you lost it ● tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
sir
/madam,
I am writing to make a claim for Capitalize word
Sir
gold
Add an article
a gold
the gold
watch
that Use synonyms
i
lost Change the capitalization
I
while
on holiday Linking Words
last
week.
The Linking Words
watch
is a Use synonyms
ladies
wristwatch a Rolex model that Change noun form
lady's
ladies'
i
inherited from Change the capitalization
I
Correct pronoun usage
my granfather
granfather
years ago.Both the Correct your spelling
grandfather
watch
strap and the face are made of gold,around the face of the Use synonyms
watch
there is a diamond ring with Use synonyms
a
rare Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
gem stones
. Next to being Correct your spelling
gemstones
expensive
and rare piece of Add an article
an expensive
jewerly
,it Correct your spelling
jewellery
also
holds a great sentimental value.
I believe that Linking Words
i
must have left the Change the capitalization
I
watch
on the nearby beach next to the hotel Use synonyms
i
was staying in.I did return to research for it, but Change the capitalization
I
i
can only assume either that someone took it or it had been covered by sand.
I took out Change the capitalization
I
a
comprehensive travel insurance with your company, and my contract states that all lost items are covered. I would Remove the article
apply
Linking Words
therefore
, ask you to review the attached information regarding the estimated value of the Add the comma(s)
, therefore
watch
and that you process my claim as quickly as possible.
Please let me know should you require any Use synonyms
further
information.
Yours faithfully,
YMLinking Words
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