On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter ● describe the item you lost ● explain how you lost it ● tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear
sir
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/madam, I am writing to make a claim for
gold
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a gold
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watch
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that
i
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lost
while
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on holiday
last
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week. The
watch
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is a
ladies
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lady's
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wristwatch a Rolex model that
i
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inherited from
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my granfather
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granfather
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grandfather
years ago.Both the
watch
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strap and the face are made of gold,around the face of the
watch
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there is a diamond ring with
a
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apply
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rare
gem stones
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gemstones
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. Next to being
expensive
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an expensive
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and rare piece of
jewerly
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jewellery
,it
also
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holds a great sentimental value. I believe that
i
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must have left the
watch
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on the nearby beach next to the hotel
i
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was staying in.I did return to research for it, but
i
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I
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can only assume either that someone took it or it had been covered by sand. I took out
a
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comprehensive travel insurance with your company, and my contract states that all lost items are covered. I would
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therefore
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, ask you to review the attached information regarding the estimated value of the
watch
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and that you process my claim as quickly as possible. Please let me know should you require any
further
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information. Yours faithfully, YM
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coherence cohesion
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lexical resource
Include more specific vocabulary to describe the watch.
grammatical range
Check for missing words and improve sentence structure.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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