Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world’s major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions.

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Nowadays, most of the people from rural
countries
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and areas move to big
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looking for better opportunities.
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life in developed
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is better compared to life in remote destinations
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various benefits. Tourism developments, Better employment opportunities, higher standards of education, living standards, financial stability and social advantages are some of the reasons for urbanisation. In my aspect, urbanisation is the most common problem for
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congestion in many major
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financial and political instability in many developing
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, most of the Individuals tend to move to another
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or a
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for their betterment.
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, the reason why a student from a third-world
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wants to invest in a standard higher education in a developed
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is because quality of the education those
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provide. They believe it can be value added to their career life rather than doing a local course or a degree in their nation.
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, thousands of students move to different
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around the world and it causes
infastructure-related
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infrastructure-related
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mainly
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and transport-related problems. Arrivals of a higher number of tourists and overpopulation in the
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are
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another reason for
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issues
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, even though urbanisation can benefit the economy of that
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or the
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, it is not always practical to face
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congestion daily basis.
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congestion is another reason for the reduction in air quality which can lead to air pollution and a huge threat to
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my perspective, it is paramount that these
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are addressed and can be mitigated by introducing a proper
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management system. People should be encouraged to travel by public transport
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public transport must be developed in a way it's more comfortable and less expensive for passengers to travel around rather than travelling in their personal vehicle.
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, improving facilities
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as parks and rides, and introducing E-bike can control
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problems and
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reduce environmental impacts. In
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as in my suggestion, the government or the municipal council should take necessary actions addressing
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issues
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before welcoming more people to their
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. The amenities and infrastructure should be developed in a way to reduce these types of
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. A
city
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should be pleasant and easy to live in and should not feel like living in hell.
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