Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world’s major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, most of the people from rural
countries
and areas move to big cities
looking for better opportunities. City
life in developed countries
is better compared to life in remote destinations due to
various benefits. Tourism developments, Better employment opportunities, higher standards of education, living standards, financial stability and social advantages are some of the reasons for urbanisation. In my aspect, urbanisation is the most common problem for traffic
congestion in many major cities
.
Due to
financial and political instability in many developing countries
, most of the Individuals tend to move to another country
or a city
for their betterment. For instance
, the reason why a student from a third-world country
wants to invest in a standard higher education in a developed country
is because quality of the education those countries
provide. They believe it can be value added to their career life rather than doing a local course or a degree in their nation. Therefore
, thousands of students move to different cities
around the world and it causes infastructure-related
Correct your spelling
infrastructure-related
issues
mainly traffic
and transport-related problems. Arrivals of a higher number of tourists and overpopulation in the cities
are also
another reason for traffic
issues
.
On the other hand
, even though urbanisation can benefit the economy of that city
or the country
, it is not always practical to face traffic
congestion daily basis. Traffic
congestion is another reason for the reduction in air quality which can lead to air pollution and a huge threat to bio diversity
. Correct your spelling
biodiversity
As per
my perspective, it is paramount that these Change preposition
From
issues
are addressed and can be mitigated by introducing a proper traffic
management system. People should be encouraged to travel by public transportAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
public transport must be developed in a way it's more comfortable and less expensive for passengers to travel around rather than travelling in their personal vehicle. Furthermore
, improving facilities such
as parks and rides, and introducing E-bike can control traffic
problems and as well as
reduce environmental impacts.
In conclusion
as in my suggestion, the government or the municipal council should take necessary actions addressing Add a comma
conclusion,
such
issues
before welcoming more people to their city
. The amenities and infrastructure should be developed in a way to reduce these types of issues
. A city
should be pleasant and easy to live in and should not feel like living in hell.Submitted by shazraibrahimphotography2 on
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