Nowadays celebrities make more money than politicians. What are the reason for this? Is it positive or negative development?

Nowadays,

celebrities

can earn more

money

compared to people who

works

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for

government

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the government

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.

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is

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happened

due to

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several reasons, mainly because of the development of

Internet

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. I believe that

this

situation will lead to

negative

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impact, specifically for the future of our country. There are two main reasons that support

celebrities

to generate more

money

.

First,

advanced technology enables

celebrities

to publish their creative works easily.

For instance

, people can utilize online streaming

platform

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,

such

as YouTube and Instagram, to post their new songs.

As a result

, they can gain a few million dollars through engagement and advertisement features. Another cogent reason is the freedom of expression offered by Internet services. People can post anything to make them viral and gather

public's

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attention.

Thus

, they can take advantage of their fame to make more

money

. I personally believe that

this

phenomenon is relatively negative for several reasons.

First,

the enormous salary gap between

celebrities

and politicians will deter the young generation's motivation to participate in politics.

Therefore

, the government potentially filled

by

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less competent candidates.

This

condition will cause

to

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more social problems in our country,

such

as poverty, unemployment, and more.

Moreover

,

this

condition will increase the possibility for public servants to commit

to

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crimes,

such

as

money

laundering and corruption.

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possibly

happen

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due to

the low salary that comes with huge responsibility, which makes them not motivated

in doing

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their job. In conclusion, the fact that

celebrities

are paid more than political leaders now is caused by the variety of income sources available on

Internet

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, and supported by the culture of social media nowadays.

However

, I believe that

this

is a negative trend which may lead to more incompetent individuals in government.