Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

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budgets are used

on

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researching

space

anually

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annually

manually

. I contend that

this

money

should be invested in improving citizens' life of all over the

world

due to

world

hunger and

energy

crisis, despite those who

belived

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believed

believe

that spending on

space

research

would increase the capacity for farming and power utilization. It should be acknowledged that improvements in

economy

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has

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increased people's lives all over the

world

.

However

,

world

hunger is still one of the biggest

problems

that the UN officials have to deal with and finance is a main factor for

this

. By spending the income for

space

research

, food and methods of agriculture would be implanted and

this

would alleviate the rates of starvation all around the

world

significantly.

Furthermore

, there would be more economic boost for the

world

as hunger is not a dramatic problem any longer.

Moreover

,

energy

insufficient is

also

a pain in the back for UN authorities.

While

green

energy

is a possible

soloution

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solution

, the main

energy

source is still fossil fuels and they are on

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verge of being completely exhausted in the future.

Thus

, the

money

used for exploring

space

should be used to apply more green

energy

plant

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to save the fuels and protect the ozone layer from the exhaust they emit.

Additionally

,

this

would save a lot of

money

for investors in the future as they would not have to

spent

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money

on

exhaust-filting

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program. Critics

has

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always

justfied

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justified

that there would be more benefits in spending on

space

research

. They argue that the land is now being polluted by factories and vehicles and finding new land and new

source

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sources

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of

energy

would solve the problem.

This

point has credibility, but if major

problems

can not be solved through

money

that has been wasted for years it could become worse.

Furthermore

, if recent

problems

could not be solved,

this

would increase to a larger scale where it couldn't

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by

UN

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any longer.

While

money

are

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spent on

space

exploring

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for the 'greater good', proponents including me

advocates

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the idea

of

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budgets should be spent on starvation and

lacking

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of

energy

as there is still no major achievement of

research

of outer

space

without having the

problems

is now being resolved.