Whether a large amount of
money
should be spent annually devoted to astronomical research, or should be used for fostering terrestrial living standards is a highly debatable topic.
This
writer agrees that
money
should be spent on living standards because of its poverty and
space
experiments are not crucial in the current era.
It must be understood that many nations around the world have low standards of ling, so these countries need more
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and boost the economic market. It is self-evident that a host of regions have faced
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problems
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money
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crisis,
money
inflation,
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of payments…,
therefore
, the quality of living is increasingly terrible.
As a consequence
, there is a variety of problems have
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on the
Earth
and people find it inconvenient and dangerous to live in
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world with exacerbated
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and serious infrastructure. Take some
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countries as an example, where
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crisis is at the forefront of public awareness,
consequently
, they should make a real effort to improve the living quality of residents
instead
of making some unimportant explorations.
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worth consideration is it
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to detect something new
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outer
space
. It cannot be denied that individuals or empires could not do anything if they found something interesting in the far
space
.
Moreover
, unless they have enough high-tech infrastructures or very modern amenities, they
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not achieve any
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success,
whereas
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Earth
have nothing to reach another peak of astronomy.
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true in Vietnam in 1980, Pham Tuan flew over the moon but he got a lot of controversial comments because
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that time, Vietnam got into many
money
problems.
Thus
it can be seen that
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money
should be
for promoting the standard of people living on the
Earth
instead
of exploring anything in the cosmic
space
.
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vital to do.