These
days
lots of
apartment
are built to save space and usually younger
people
seemsChange the verb form
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to prefer living in an
apartment
rather than
landAdd an article
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house. It is
anChange the article
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debate on
people
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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reside in high-rise
apartmentFix the agreement mistake
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have an unhappy and lonely life
while
others think in opposite.
High-rise
condominiumFix the agreement mistake
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are mostly built in
aCorrect article usage
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city centre where spaces available are limited and these
days
it seems normal to live in a
condominium
.
However
, there is an argument that
said Verb problem
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people
in
condominiumFix the agreement mistake
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might be unhappy and lonely.
This
might
becauseAdd a missing verb
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people
in
condominiumAdd an article
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seems to ignore each
othersChange to a singular noun
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and go through their lives with no socializing. Especially, these
days
people
are more
focusReplace the word
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on chasing their careers rather than spending time with
othersCorrect quantifier usage
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people
.
Therefore
,
people
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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live in high building might be lonely as there are no
emotionallyChange the word
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support from their community. I agree with
this
statement as most of the
apartment
residents
doVerb problem
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not even aware of who are their neighbours.
Several
People
found that living in a
condominium
might not have an
affectReplace the word
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on their social lives.
As Correct word choice
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Mostly, single
people
or small families select
condominiumFix the agreement mistake
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as their house
due to
convenientReplace the word
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and they might not need a
lotAdd the preposition
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spacesFix the agreement mistake
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.
Moreover
, these
days
most
of Change preposition
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an Correct article usage
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apartment
buildingFix the agreement mistake
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have a lounge where residents might have a small gathering or minggle
.
Thus
,
this
will reduce their loneliness.
However
,
this
is not
an Correct article usage
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entirely a solution because not all
people
are comfortable
in Change preposition
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hanging out in lounge
chairFix the agreement mistake
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.
Therefore
, it might cause some
people
to
haveVerb problem
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lonelinessReplace the word
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.
In conclusion,
People
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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livingWrong verb form
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in a high building most likely to feel lonely
due to
the