Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends were you stayed at their house. They have just send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends, in your letter: Thank them for the holday and the photos Explain why didn't write earlier Invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Jack and Maria, It's really great to

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from you, and I'm sorry that I haven'

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been able to contact you until now. First of all, I can'

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even say how much I missed you both because those two weeks that we spent together

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increadible

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incredible

and I don'

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know how to say thank you for making those great memories for me.

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, the photos you sent me became another reason to remember the wonderful

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I spent in your house, and

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again

thanks for being so kind to send them as well. After I came back home, I

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an issue with regard to my job, so I had to double the

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I used to work in the company to compensate

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ascence

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absence

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otherwise

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there was a great chance of

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my job.

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is why I didn'

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have any

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to write

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sooner. By the way, I would be so

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glad

if you

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come to London

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time

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and I promise that we can

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enjoy spending

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together

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in my city. I

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can't

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wait to see you again Best Wishes, Arash

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task achievement

Make sure to address all of the points mentioned in the prompt. In this case, you have thanked your friends for the holiday and the photos, but you have not explicitly explained why you did not write earlier. Try to be more specific in your response.

coherence cohesion

Overall, the coherence and cohesion of your letter is good. However, it would be beneficial to have a more organized structure. Consider using separate paragraphs for different ideas to improve the flow of your writing.

lexical resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary in your letter, but it would be even better if you could incorporate more specific and descriptive words to make your writing more engaging.

grammatical range

Your grammatical range is generally accurate, but there are a few minor errors throughout the letter. Be mindful of subject-verb agreement and word choice to improve the accuracy of your writing.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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