The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates Norbiton which is an industrial region at the moment, and the version of the planned
future
development. factory. Current
situation of the area is only composed of factories both near the centre and the river. Correct article usage
The current
On the contrary
, in the
Correct article usage
apply
future
developments, this
place will include public places for instance
kindergarten, school
, shops and a medical centre. Norbiton includes a long and narrow river, located at the North side of the region, Correct article usage
a school
however
the place is empty now, in the Add a comma
however,
future
it will be surrounded by houses which could be reached by passing a bridge, which will Add a comma
future,
also
be built in the future
. The north west
side surged in deforestation and housing Correct your spelling
northwest
while
south
of Norbiton is going to be filled with shops in order to maintain the demands of locals. Current factories are mostly gathered on the east side of the region Correct article usage
the south
where
Correct word choice
which
it
continues ahead in Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
direction, in fact
the planned Add a comma
fact,
future
development showed us that the factories will be replaced with housing after construction.Submitted by airbender on
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