Write a letter to a friend inviting them to go on vacation with you. Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want them to come with you
I hope you are well long time
no see
each other I Verb problem
since we saw
take
15 days off from work
I was planning to travel to Japan as I remember that our dream was Wrong verb form
am taking
visit
Japan to try new things and I heard that it is Change the verb form
to visit
visiting
beautiful
city to visit especially Tokyo .
I have Add an article
a beautiful
been
Correct your spelling
seen
see
our photos in Korea and many memories back to me and I would thank you for Verb problem
apply
this
memory we were happy that
time Change preposition
at that
therefore
I would like to travel to Japan again with you as well. Moreover
, it would be grateful
Correct word choice
great
to
us to back our Change preposition
for
friendships
it Fix the agreement mistake
friendship
was
6 Months Wrong verb form
has been
we
Correct word choice
since we
did not see
each other so it is Verb problem
saw
chance
to travel together and Correct article usage
a chance
know
about everything in our life .
I am going to reserve tickets beginning 01 of August till 15 of August if you have any questions please let me know Verb problem
learn
also
the rest of things
Correct article usage
the things
just let
Wrong verb form
will be
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
handle
.
I appreciate your time. Thank you.
Yours faithfully,Wrong verb form
handled
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coherence cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structure and use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the coherence and cohesion of your writing.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your greeting and closing match the formal tone of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and be well-developed.
task achievement
Your response adequately addresses the task and includes the necessary information.
lexical resource
Consider using more specific and descriptive language to enhance your lexical resource.
grammatical range
Work on improving your grammatical range and accuracy to avoid errors.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
