Write a letter to a friend inviting them to go on vacation with you. Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want them to come with you

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I hope you are well long time

no see

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since we saw

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each other I

take

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am taking

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15 days off from work I was planning to travel to Japan as I remember that our dream was

visit

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to visit

visiting

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Japan to try new things and I heard that it is

beautiful

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a beautiful

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city to visit especially Tokyo . I have

been

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seen

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see

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apply

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our photos in Korea and many memories back to me and I would thank you for

this

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memory we were happy

that

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at that

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time

therefore

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I would like to travel to Japan again with you as well.

Moreover

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, it would be

grateful

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great

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for

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us to back our

friendships

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friendship

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was

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has been

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6 Months

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since we

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did not see

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saw

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each other so it is

chance

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a chance

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to travel together and

know

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learn

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about everything in our life . I am going to reserve tickets beginning 01 of August till 15 of August if you have any questions please let me know

also

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the rest of

things

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the things

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just let

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will be

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apply

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handle

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handled

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. I appreciate your time. Thank you. Yours faithfully,

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coherence cohesion

Try to vary your sentence structure and use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the coherence and cohesion of your writing.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that your greeting and closing match the formal tone of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and be well-developed.

task achievement

Your response adequately addresses the task and includes the necessary information.

lexical resource

Consider using more specific and descriptive language to enhance your lexical resource.

grammatical range

Work on improving your grammatical range and accuracy to avoid errors.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

167 words

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The Greeting

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