You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well.
This
is to inform you regarding my willingness to get a short-term assessment exposure in our Canadian office for six months. I appreciate your kind consideration in
this
matter with a better understanding of my requirements. As you know, my MBA dissertation is related to the analysis of the business model in various locations of our company, it is mandatory for me to get real exposure to the business operations in the local context of Canada.
Hence
, I believe an STA is an ideal opportunity for me to get hands-on experience there. In relation to the current job responsibilities of my role, I have already spoken to Sugath as to how the work can be split between myself and him
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so that I can manage it
while
I stay in Canada. He
also
has provided his consent to undertake the suggested tasks and soon I will share the agreed plan with you.
Finally
, as I need to get formal approval in written form from your end to be submitted to the Canadian office to arrange by Visa, it would be highly appreciated if you could provide the relevant letter within the next week if possible. Thank you in advance for your extended support in granting permission and giving me the support to utilize my expertise in a foreign country. Yours sincerely, Tharinda
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