the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport.

 summarize the information
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The line graph gives information about the quantities of goods in Million tonnes which were transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by road, water, rail and pipeline.
Overall
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, the road method was the most common way of transportation in all years. The rail mode which stood at 40M in 1974 was just under the waterway in the same year.
However
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, it fluctuated and back to 40M in 2002 in comparison with the water model which showed growth until 1982 and remained for 16 years and
then
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increased significantly.
Moreover
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, the pipeline method which was just above 0M in 1974 sharply rose to approximately 25M in 1982 and remained until 1990 after that it decreased dramatically to 20M in 1994 and stayed untouched.
On the other hand
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, the road model which was the most popular way and stood at approximately 70M in 1974 after some ups and downs until 1982 experienced a slight increase to just under 80M in 1990 and onwards to just under 100M in 2002.
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