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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns ad cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #ad #cities
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 medical care in three European countries,counted in
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,from 1960 to 2000.
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up ward
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 trend except for that of clothing In terms of the amount of food,despite having the highest starting point at over 30 in1960,
this
 number declined dramatically to approximately 13 after 40 years. As for the data
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 leisure,commencing at precisely 20,the drop sharply to over 10 in 2000. With respect to the amount of clothing and means of transport,
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 they had
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 uniform initial point at around 10,they had different
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trend
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.The former observed a rapid
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 to 15 which is the highest in 2000.Meanwhile the latter slid away drastically to exactly 5 With regard to the number of energy,it plunged from 5 to nearly 0 after a 40-year period of time.
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