the charts below show the change in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The first line chart above illustrates the ownership change of electric appliances and the second shows the allocation of time needed for house chores being done from 1920 to 2019 in an unknown country.
Overall
, everyone had vacuum
cleaner, washing machine, and refrigerator at their home in 2019 even though a century ago usage of these appliances Correct article usage
a vacuum
is
below 45%. With increases in technology usage, hours of housework spent per week Wrong verb form
was
declining
gradually.
In 1920, almost no one had Wrong verb form
declined
the
refrigerator at home but Correct article usage
a
this
behaviour changed dramatically to 50% in 1940. However
, this
trend kept rising to 90% in 1960 and had a peak at 100% in 1980 follows
the next 40 years. Vacuum cleaner, Wrong verb form
following
nevertheless
, 30% of citizen
already had been using it in 1920. There Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
has been
steady growth in Wrong verb form
was
following
Add an article
a following
the following
year
almost 55% in 1940, had been utilized 90% in 1960 and after 1980 Fix the agreement mistake
years
it's
impossible for everyone Wrong verb form
it was
for
not Change preposition
apply
having
Change the verb form
to have
vacuum
cleaner.
40% of Add an article
a vacuum
household
managed to use washing Fix the agreement mistake
households
machine
in 1920. It rose to 70% in 1960 and dropped Fix the agreement mistake
machines
at
nearly 65% before it increased to around 72% in 2019. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, all these technology
Replace the word
technological
invention
makes the time allocation for house chores Change the determiner
inventions
decreasing
. In 1920, half time of a week Wrong verb form
decrease
spent
Add a missing verb
was spent
for
domestic labour. Change preposition
on
Thus
, this
trend has dropped steadily by nearly 35% in 1940 and continue
to decline in 2019 at around 10%.Wrong verb form
continued
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