The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008.
The chart shows the migration data in the
UK
from 1999 to 2008, consisting of immigration and emigration in the line chart and net migration in the bar chart. Overall
, the number
of immigrants and emigration simultaneously rose, whereas
the net migration fluctuated over a 10-year period.
In 1999, the number
of immigrants who entered the UK
stood at around 459 thousand
, followed by a slow increase until 2003, then
a dramatic incline happened in 2004 to almost 600 thousand
people. Consequently
, The number
of immigrants leaving for the UK
reached a peak in 2006 at 600 thousand
and continued to level off around the latest number
.
On the other hand
, the number
of people leaving the UK
were
just under 300 Change the verb form
was
thousand
in the late 1990s and remained growing until 2003 to nearly 400 thousand
of
people. Change preposition
apply
In contrast
to the immigration condition in 2004, the number
of emigrants fell to about 350 thousand
. The amount of emigrants returned to the 2004 level after reaching its temporary highest in 2006 at 400 thousand
. Finally
, the number
of emigrants soared to just above 400 thousand
in 2008.Submitted by raviandrakanty on
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