The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table underneath compares the number of products like

coffe

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coffee

, tea, pastries and sandwiches sold on a particular

day

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by a

coffee

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shop located in an office building.

Overall

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, most proportions of

coffee

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were sold in the first and

last

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half of the

day

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whereas

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purchase

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snadwiches

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sandwiches

topped in the second

hlaf

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half

. When compared totally

coffee

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was the most demanded product

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tea counted for the least. During the morning hours of 7:30 to 10:30, about 265 orders of

coffee

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were made for the customers.

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this

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, the

numbers

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plunged throughout the

day

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before rising up considerably to 200 sales by 5:30-8:30. Selling tea held maximum value in the first half of the

day

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counting to 110 cups sold,

following

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this

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, the

numbers

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plummeted drastically and fluctuated for a

while

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before clocking up at 75 sales by the end of the

day

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. Selling pastries experienced a alternating trend starting off from a high of 275 sales in the beginning of the

day

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and end by the lowest

numbers

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of only 80 peices by 5:30-8:30. Sandwiches

on the other hand

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, started the business with just selling 50 peices in the first half,

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this

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, the

numbers

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skyrocketted to 200 during the noon time and it continued to fluctuate afterwards.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words day, coffee, numbers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

peak hours
trough in sales
high consumer demand
lunchtime surge
light meals
caffeine boost
sustained interest
fluctuate
comparison of products
typical weekday
busiest period

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