The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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table underneath compares the number of products like
coffe
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coffee
, tea, pastries and sandwiches sold on a particular
day
by a
coffee
shop located in an office building.
Overall
, most proportions of
coffee
were sold in the first and
last
half of the
day
,
whereas
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the purchase
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purchase
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of
snadwiches
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sandwiches
topped in the second
hlaf
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half
. When compared totally
coffee
was the most demanded product
while
tea counted for the least. During the morning hours of 7:30 to 10:30, about 265 orders of
coffee
were made for the customers.
After
this
, the
numbers
plunged throughout the
day
before rising up considerably to 200 sales by 5:30-8:30. Selling tea held maximum value in the first half of the
day
counting to 110 cups sold,
following
this
, the
numbers
plummeted drastically and fluctuated for a
while
before clocking up at 75 sales by the end of the
day
. Selling pastries experienced a alternating trend starting off from a high of 275 sales in the beginning of the
day
and end by the lowest
numbers
of only 80 peices by 5:30-8:30. Sandwiches
on the other hand
, started the business with just selling 50 peices in the first half,
after
this
, the
numbers
skyrocketted to 200 during the noon time and it continued to fluctuate afterwards.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words day, coffee, numbers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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