Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people could see historical objects and works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the fast-developing of the internet, it is easily accessible for the public to have a museum or gallery tour by

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means of going to an online website.

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for

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reason, there is an argument about whether museums and galleries are needed

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people

. In my opinion, the internet visits will not replace the physical ones. It is more meaningful not only for

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ordinary

people

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for

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artists to pay a visit to

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public museums or

art

galleries in person. Because

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there you can spend as much time as you can

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observing the details of the acts which could be a piece of

jewelry

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or a vase from

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dynasty.

In contrast

, there are some drawbacks

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using

computer

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. One is that it might not make it possible to see the shining of the precious stones or the bright

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of the vases, which makes the visit meaningless in some way by glancing

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valuable artworks.

Furthermore

, visiting a museum or a gallery is a nice way to get rid of the monotony of the daily

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. Because there is

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a harmonious atmosphere in

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kind of place, which can effectively help to reduce visitors’ stress.

For example

, spending a weekend day with family or friends appreciating pieces of

art

can lessen the boredom of

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city life, which might enlighten the

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of

people

.

Moreover

, these places of

art

can

also

boost the economy of the local area. Since nowadays

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on

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convenient public transportation,

people

are never tired of

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far

distance

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to take a snap,

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post them to their social media, which means that tourists will consume at the local restaurants and hotels. And the increase in tourism revenue can lead

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improvement

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local

people

’s living

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as well as

the infrastructure,

such

as the roads. In conclusion, within the foreseeable future, I would like to say that museums or

art

galleries are required to exist and they cannot be replaced by digital tours.