One way to solve the problem of traffic is to increase the tax on private vehicles. State your opinion and give example

There is no denying the fact that

traffic

congetion

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congestion

problems.

While

it is a commonly held belief that the

governemnt

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government

should increase the tax on private

vehicles

to address the issue of

traffic

, there is

also

an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that increasing the tax on private

vehicles

is a bad solution.

To begin

with, the government can apply a lot of rules to

organaize

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organise

the

traffic

system.

In other words

, the government should

band

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ban

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private

vehicles

to enter

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from entering

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main

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the main

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streets

especially

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in the morning.

In addition

, expanding main roads plays a crucial role

to solve

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in solving

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this

problem.

For example

, permanent

maintance

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maintenance

and policemen's roles may help to

decreas

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decrease

assemble op people. Another point to consider, the authority should increase awareness about using

a

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public transportation. It is

also

possible to say that,

this

will lead to a lack of private

car

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cars

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in

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on

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main roads and private

vehicles

can be easily

drove

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.

Moreover

,

this

brings

another

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numerous

advanatges

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advantages

such

as saving time, increasing employees, and allocating

budget

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the budget

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.

For instance

, China has established

train

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trains

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that can reach

to

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apply

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any location in the country in

short

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a short

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time and

affordable

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. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that the government can

slove

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solve

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the

traffic's

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traffic

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problem by

organazing

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organising

the

enrty

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entry

time of

vehicles

, expanding the main roads ,

tending

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and tending

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people to use public transportation. I think if the

goverment

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government

do

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does

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these

soultions

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solutions

, many problems will be solved beyond just the problem of

traffic

.