One way to solve the problem of traffic is to increase the tax on private vehicles. State your opinion and give example

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There is no denying the fact that
traffic
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congetion
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congestion
problems.
While
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it is a commonly held belief that the
governemnt
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government
should increase the tax on private
vehicles
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to address the issue of
traffic
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, there is
also
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an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that increasing the tax on private
vehicles
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is a bad solution.
To begin
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with, the government can apply a lot of rules to
organaize
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organise
the
traffic
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system.
In other words
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, the government should
band
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ban
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private
vehicles
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to enter
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from entering
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main
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the main
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streets
especially
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, especially
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in the morning.
In addition
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, expanding main roads plays a crucial role
to solve
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in solving
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this
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problem.
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, permanent
maintance
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maintenance
and policemen's roles may help to
decreas
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decrease
assemble op people. Another point to consider, the authority should increase awareness about using
a
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apply
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public transportation. It is
also
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possible to say that,
this
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will lead to a lack of private
car
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cars
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in
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on
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main roads and private
vehicles
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can be easily
drove
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driven
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.
Moreover
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,
this
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brings
another
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other
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numerous
advanatges
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advantages
such
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as saving time, increasing employees, and allocating
budget
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the budget
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.
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, China has established
train
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trains
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that can reach
to
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apply
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any location in the country in
short
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a short
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time and
affordable
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are affordable
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. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that the government can
slove
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solve
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the
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traffic's
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traffic
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problem by
organazing
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organising
the
enrty
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entry
time of
vehicles
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, expanding the main roads ,
tending
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and tending
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people to use public transportation. I think if the
goverment
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government
do
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does
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these
soultions
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solutions
, many problems will be solved beyond just the problem of
traffic
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.
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