The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organisations in 2015. Summarise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features, and make conparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organisations in 2015. Summarise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features, and make conparison where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how much money was dedicated by five different institutions over four functions in 2015. Generally, the majority of them invest more in building and staff training,
whereas
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the remaining types are allocated less. Three out of five organizations spend most budget on building, with the highest allocation valued at about 1.5 by institution A followed by organizations D and E at 1 each. Company B
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budgeted its building expenditure in a relatively higher amount of 1.4.
However
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,
this
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expenditure comes as the third priority compared to other expenditures within organization B
such
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as
research
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and staff training as the two biggest investments at 1.6 and approximately 1.9 respectively. Other companies, namely C and D, allocate staff training as the mere concern after other categories.
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, institution C allocates most of its budget for machinery and
research
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by just above 1.2,
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to others within the cohort which spend the least expenditure on machinery
as well as
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research
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, company E allocated machinery function at only 0.8 and
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D spent as little as 0.6 on
research
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