The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050.

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These two diagrams illustrate the projected global production in six proportions in 2030

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2050.

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, in both years, the services portion will take the prime part of the production, and the second biggest portion will be the manufacturing.

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, it is estimated that two out of six portions will decrease in 2050. The services portion is anticipated to be slightly over half of the chart in 2030 and 2050, which will be 50.2 and 51.2%

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each year. In the former year, the manufacturing sector will be 30.6% and will have a 2.5% increase, which will be 33.1% in 2050. The number of global production in energy and agriculture areas

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predicted to decrease in 2050, both of them will have a slight drop

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2%. The former will have a 2.4% decrease in 2050, the diminish in the latter will be 2%. And the percentage for each area

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4.3 and 2% in 2050.

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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050.

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Should the government spend money on roads or railways? explain your opinion

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