Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do agree or disagree ?

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There is an
arguement
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argument
that dollars should be spent on the
lving
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living
standards of the
Earth
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whereas
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a
big
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number of dollars are used to
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on
space
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every year. The writer
agree
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with the statement that
imrpving
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improving
the living of
Earth
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which is have more advantages. First of all, the
money
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nowadays
are
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used to spend on lots of items to support
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the
researches
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outside the
Earth
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. It may have to do something which
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a harmful effects
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harmful effects
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on the
Earth
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.
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, because of many helps for
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space
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due to
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the
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human have to buy more material for experiments and emit
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pollution which affect
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the Ozone and the Oxygen of the
Earth
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.
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, the
researches
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on
space
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are waste of time.
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, they have to use more
money
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to boost the time faster.
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,
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chemical
material
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materials
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such
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as Nitrogen
, Sulfur
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and sulfur
can be
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to do research
of
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on
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the
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space
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though
it
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have a big impact on the Ozone and the gas
of
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Sulfur can be
harm
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for
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human
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humans
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.
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, there is a solution
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this
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issue. The scientists and governments should take the
money
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to spend on the living standard of
Earth
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more than
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space
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. If we spend the
money
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on the facility of
Earth
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it can have so many positive benefits like improving the atmosphere for
citizen
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citizens
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, reducing the lack of Ozone,
developing
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and developing
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many methods to protect the environment.
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, it can have less danger of the work because if we are outside the
Earth
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we will have less
supportation
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supposition
than inside it and the
money
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to spend on it will be
saving
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. In conclusion, the writer strongly
argue
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that
spend
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spending
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money
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for
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on
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the living standard of
Earth
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will have many
advantages
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more advantages
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than for
the
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apply
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space
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each year.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • scientific discoveries
  • cutting-edge technology
  • pioneering research
  • socio-economic development
  • improved healthcare
  • education
  • poverty alleviation
  • infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • cost-effective
  • prioritize
  • allocate
  • resources
  • budget
  • investment
  • sustainable development
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