people who live in a large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problems ? How can these problems be tackled?

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There is a doubt that the citizens living in large cities
nowaday
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nowadays
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face a variety of
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issues
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in their social life. The most critical of these is the
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pollution
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that
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to
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and the rising
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unemployment.
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, it can be solved by combating poverty by promoting economic development and
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creation. The principal cause of
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air
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pollution
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is harmful to
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and
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people
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dramatically.
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is because of the
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from
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the
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industries and vehicles.
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pollution
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can cause respiratory diseases, cardiovascular diseases, cancer, and global warming.
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, in Vietnam
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big
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amount of
people
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drive their own vehicles that emit lots of
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, some
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keen on walking so they inhale the
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and
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cause
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their health badly
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in Vietnam many
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by
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lung cancer. The other problem is
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the rising of unemployment.
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, the population are higher so some company have enough employment and do not need more human resource staff so it
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for citizens to find
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.
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,
people
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are trying to develop more technology that can replace
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in
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jobs
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, it can be a part of
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people
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life
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lives
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and benefits
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people
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business
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businesses
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. As you see, the invention of A.I like
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can
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change
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people
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life
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as
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industrial
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are
robots
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that work in factories, warehouses, and other industrial settings. They can perform tasks
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as welding, painting, assembling, packaging, and moving materials. They are usually fixed in one place and have one or more arms with joints and grippers. Some examples of industrial
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are articulated
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, Cartesian
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, SCARA
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, cylindrical
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, delta
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, and polar
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. the solution of these is
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poverty by promoting economic development and
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creation. Some
product
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products
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can be cheaper and the way to hire a new
job
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is easier so you can have
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a change
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change
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chance
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to get a
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.
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, using public transport is
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necessary
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to reduce
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.
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founded to make a country
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atmosphere
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people
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from abroad can
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about our country. In conclusion, the crucial effects
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the
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air
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pollution
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and rising
of
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unemployment
is
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the gas
emission
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emissions
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from industries and vehicles
and
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which
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can be demonstrated and taken form of using public transport.
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