people who live in a large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problems ? How can these problems be tackled?
There is a doubt that the citizens living in large cities
nowaday
face a variety of Correct your spelling
nowadays
issue
in their social life. The most critical of these is the Fix the agreement mistake
issues
air
pollution
that harmful
to Add a missing verb
is harmful
environment
and the rising Add an article
the environment
of
unemployment. Change preposition
apply
However
, it can be solved by combating poverty by promoting economic development and job
creation.
The principal cause of the
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apply
air
pollution
is harmful to environment
and Add an article
the environment
affect
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affects
people
areas
dramatically. Correct word choice
and areas
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is because of the smoke
and fossil fuel
that Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
emit
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are emitted
from
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by
the
industries and vehicles. Correct article usage
apply
Air
pollution
can cause respiratory diseases, cardiovascular diseases, cancer, and global warming. for instance
, in Vietnam the
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a
big
amount of Correct word choice
large
people
drive their own vehicles that emit lots of smoke
, some is
keen on walking so they inhale the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
smoke
and
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apply
cause
their health badly Verb problem
affecting
so that
in Vietnam many Correct word choice
apply
people
dead
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die
by
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of
a
lung cancer.
The other problem is Remove the article
apply
that
the rising of unemployment. Correct word choice
apply
In other words
, the population are higher so some company have enough employment and do not need more human resource staff so it harder
for citizens to find Add a missing verb
is harder
job
. Consequently
, people
are trying to develop more technology that can replace people
in job
, it can be a part of Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
people
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people's
life
and benefits Fix the agreement mistake
lives
to
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apply
people
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people's
business
. As you see, the invention of A.I like Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
robot
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robots
can
change Correct pronoun usage
that can
people
life Change noun form
people's
such
as
industrial Change preposition
apply
robots
are robots
that work in factories, warehouses, and other industrial settings. They can perform tasks such
as welding, painting, assembling, packaging, and moving materials. They are usually fixed in one place and have one or more arms with joints and grippers. Some examples of industrial robots
are articulated robots
, Cartesian robots
, SCARA robots
, cylindrical robots
, delta robots
, and polar robots
.
the solution of these is combat
poverty by promoting economic development and Fix the infinitive
to combat
job
creation. Some product
can be cheaper and the way to hire a new Fix the agreement mistake
products
job
is easier so you can have Add an article
a change
the change
change
to get a Correct your spelling
chance
job
. Moreover
, using public transport is neccesary
for Correct your spelling
necessary
people
to reduce a
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apply
smoke
emission
. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
For example
, Vinfast in Vietnam had been
founded to make a country Wrong verb form
was
more clean
and Replace the words
cleaner
atmostphere
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atmosphere
that
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where
people
from abroad can passionate
about our country.
In conclusion, the crucial effects Add a missing verb
be passionate
for
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of
the
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apply
air
pollution
and rising of
unemployment Change preposition
apply
is
the gas Verb problem
apply
emission
from industries and vehicles Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
and
can be demonstrated and taken form of using public transport.Correct word choice
which
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