The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
The procedure of brick production is
illusterated
which is used in building construction. Correct your spelling
illustrated
Overall
, elaborately does the whole operation is consisted
of seven stages Wrong verb form
consists
involved
three main Wrong verb form
involving
level
; digging, processing and delivering.
First of all,as the first step the clay is diggied from the ground by a digger; in the following, a metal grid which is just above the roller, Fix the agreement mistake
levels
seperates
Correct your spelling
separates
this
clay before mixing with
water and salt. After that, in order to Correct pronoun usage
it with
shaping
them to create bricks, the producer uses a wire cutter or a mould.
In the next stage, bricks must be dried Change the verb
shape
into
an oven Change preposition
in
at
least 24 hours, but not more than two days. Regarding the final stage of production, bricks are put in Change preposition
for at
kiln
with the Add an article
a kiln
the kiln
intial
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initial
temepreture
around 200C; but, its Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
temeperatue
gradually increases up to 1300C. after spending two or three days in Correct your spelling
temperature
cooling
chamber, they are ready to be packed and Add an article
the cooling
delevered
to the customers by trucks.Correct your spelling
delivered
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