Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation
Dear Charles,
I am requesting you to publish a historical building in the newspaper.
Whenever I have time I especially go to the Shahi Qila with my family.
This
building was the oldest one in my town and most people go to see historical features.
when I visited this
government property last
time I felt bad due to
its poor condition. Besides
this
, many visitors were also
amazed to see the ancient building. However
, the problem of this
building is continuously wrong. Whenever I go there I see the wall paint is missing and some graffiti on the building which is an alarming situation. Furthermore
, the statue at the main entrance has shattered and it looks awful. The Mughal time's swords
are missing on the walls due to
selling by the administration.The Shahi Qilla building is a heritage of our nation so it should be maintained.
I am writing a request to please go and visit the area and capture the pictures then
you can print them on your newspaper. After that, you may write a short column about this
ancient building so that the government should
take necessary action.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,Verb problem
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task response
Ensure that the letter clearly addresses all the required points mentioned in the task prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Use appropriate linking words and sentence structure to enhance the coherence and cohesion of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.
grammatical range
Pay attention to the correct usage of grammar and sentence structures to improve the overall clarity of your writing.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.