This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives
the
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information about the recycling percentage for four different kinds of
materials
in one specific country during the period of 18 years, commencing from 1982. It is clear from the graph that the recycling rate of both paper and glass
materials
saw a
fluctuated
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trend from the year 1982
while
the other two types of aluminium cans and plastic only observed
their
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upward trend from 1986 and 1990 respectively. The recycling proportion of both paper-made products and glass containers varied until they saw a rise in 1990
then
they started to have opposite trends.
Although
the rate
in
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reprocessing paper and cardboard
materials
declined moderately to 70% until 2010, it was still higher than the percentage of glass products by 10%.
Furthermore
, the rate of reused cans made by aluminium increased significantly from only 5% in 1986 to more than 45% in 2010
while
plastics
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materials
observed minimal growth during the years before it reached its peak at nearly 10%
at the end
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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