The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001 ]
The multi-line graph illustrates data regarding kids by
age
group among a proportion of the Use synonyms
youngster
in the UK from 1990 to 2001. Generally speaking, it is readily apparent that the Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
overall
situation has dramatically increased in the considered time period, albeit with specific trends for each year.
First off, the percentage of the aged 10-14 faced a steep and constant decrease from 1990 to 1993, which dropped by approximately 3%, Linking Words
while
the other three Linking Words
age
groups had a lightly increase. And Use synonyms
then
over the next four years, the Linking Words
age
population aged 5 to 19 was slowly rising, but at the Use synonyms
age
of 5-9 was ranked Use synonyms
first,
with nearly 26%.
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On the other hand
, from 1997 to 2001, the proportions of 10-14 and 15-19 years old saw a moderate growth, which both increased by 1%. Linking Words
On the contrary
, there was a slight decline in the trend between the 0-4 and 5-Linking Words
9 year-old
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9-year-old
age
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group
, with Fix the agreement mistake
groups
decreased
to 23.5% and 25% respectively. Replace the word
decreases
Finally
, the proportion of young people aged 0-4 Linking Words
which had
the highest at the beginning of the study period, which was 26%. Verb problem
was
However
, children of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
were
reached the bottom at the conclusion of the given interval, only roughly 23%.Unnecessary verb
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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