You were unhappy about a meal in a restaurant. write a letter to the manager, tell him why you chose his restaurant, explain why you were not happy about the service and tell him what to do.

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to express my

dissatisfation

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dissatisfaction

with your establishment I am

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a constat

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constat

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constant

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client

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your restaurant.

Initially

, my

last

visit was on 12 of October which is before 2 days I

notice

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that

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apply

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a newly recruited waiter I thought he

needs

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needed

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more training to be more polite when he

speak

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spoke

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with customers

moreover

, he was rude

with

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us with regards to our order my friends were shocked about his reactions

therfore

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therefore

, my

freinds

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friends

did not admire your services and staff. As I am one of the big

customer

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I would like to

proposals

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to take action against a new waiter give him

warning

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a warning

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as well

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apply

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also

deduct

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and deduct

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one day from his salary I think he will be more

poliet

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polite

. Yours faithfully, Sarah

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task response

Ensure that all relevant points relating to why the restaurant was chosen are included in the letter.

coherence cohesion

Organize the letter with clear paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Expand your range of vocabulary and use specific words to express your dissatisfaction and suggestions.

grammatical range

Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

Word Count

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

128 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You were unhappy about a meal in a restaurant. write a letter to the manager, tell him why you chose his restaurant, explain why you were not happy about the service and tell him what to do.

Word Count

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