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compare house prices between 2013 and1995 at England

These charts illustrate give some information about the average price of
houses
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 between
years
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the years
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 1995 and 2013 in
England
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,
London
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, and 5 other regions of
England
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.
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, it can be noticed that
houses
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 in
London
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 are more expensive than other residential parts of
England
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 in both years. In 1995 the average cost of
England
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houses
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 was nearly 60000
GB
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although
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this
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 number for
London
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houses
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 was 90000
GB
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 and there was a small gap between them.
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, in 2013 there is (Tense) a remarkable gap between the house prices in
London
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 and
England
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. In 2013
London
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houses
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 were approximately as twice expensive as
England
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's average residential regions which means
London
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 is nearly 380000
GB
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while
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England
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 is 160000
GB
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. For more details, the second bar chart helps to know the house prices of various parts of
England
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in contrast
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 with
London
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 in 2013. Midlands house prices are near 120000
GB
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, North is 100000
GB
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, South East is 220000, East is 175000, and
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 South West is 165000. All these data show
London
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houses
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 are much more expensive than the other cities

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