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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of the teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In contemporary educational institutes, disciplinary issues have become a matter of growing concern.
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 many argue that it is the duty of
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 to instruct the
students
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 about behavioural norms, I concur with the opinion that proper discipline should be taught by
parents
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. On the one hand, the responsibility of a teacher is not only limited to sharing
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academic knowledge but
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 to
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 after other aspects of pupils,
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 as maintaining proper decorum.
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 to say,
teachers
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 should assess
students
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' behavior, guide them, and if needed take correctional measures so that they follow the convention of the school and society at large. To illustrate, if two
students
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 get into a fight
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 some disagreements, it will be the teacher's job to address the issue
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 and warn them of the consequences so that their action is not repeated.
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, it is
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 evident that no matter how much
teachers
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 try, some
students
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 never seem to learn.
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 is because, compared to
teachers
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parents
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 spend more time with individual
students
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, so if those pupils are expected to understand the differences between
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appropriate
 and
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inappropriate
 activities, it should come from the
parents
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. At home,
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 observe their children closely,
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 allowing them to identify actions that may not be suitable at school or outside environments. In turn, they will be able to teach their offspring the means to behave
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.
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, a recent survey found that
students
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 who spend more time with their
parents
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 are likely to commit fewer nuisances.
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, I believe, primarily, the discipline of
students
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 is the responsibility of their
parents
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.
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, even though both the teacher and
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 can be separately held responsible for the conduct of
students
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, I think
parents
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 have a bigger role to play
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 it.
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