Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Some people think individuals are more and more independent. Discuss and give your opinion.

We are living in a fast-changing world, and our lives are totally different from the ones a couple of decades ago. Many believe that it is of great

benefits

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benefit

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to live alone,

while

others think they need

friends

and family to accompany them.

This

essay will discuss both arguments in depth, and provide personal options.

To begin

with, when people grow up, they will become more and more busy. They may not have spare time to communicate with their

friends

and family.

Nevertheless

, talking to other people plays a crucial role in our lives.

In other words

, without expressing their emotion, loneliness would lead people to

feeling

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feel

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tired and anxious.

For example

, I face a lot of difficulties in my work, when I tell my

friends

they will give me some useful suggestions and encourage me to overcome adversity.

Therefore

, I can get a great deal of emotional support.

On the other hand

, with the development of science and technology. There are more and more things that we can finish by ourselves.

This

means

,

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we do not need to turn to our family or

friends

for help. To elaborate, when we break down something in my home, it is not necessary to ask parents how to fix it, We just need to search

information

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for information

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on the Internet. There is enough experience online which

contribute

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contributes

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to

repair

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repairing

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it. In conclusion,

although

technology is beneficial for independence, we

also

need

dependent

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to depend

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on each other. As far as I am concerned, reliance is able to improve our happiness.