The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major/ main/ primary categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart below presents the percentage of money allocated for 5 primary categories in 5 different countries in 2009.
Overall
, spending for food, housing and transport accounted for/ made up/ took up the majority, whereas
the figures for health care and clothing were the minority.
Standing at 26%, Americans spent the most on housing which was 4% more than that of Canada. Meanwhile, the highest budget allocated for transportation belonged to Canadians. However
, the money for food in both countries showed little difference. Whereas
the medical expense in the US was the highest, which doubled in Canada, Canadians’s spending on clothing was 3% more than in the US.
Similarly
, housing, food, and transportation took up the majority of the spending of the British and Japanese, at 50% and 55% respectively. Although
there was a similar proportion of expenditure for foodstuff and housing in Japan at 22%, travel expenses were just half. Strikingly, the cost of health services in the UK was the lowest, just one-third compared to clothing, whereas
. those figures in Japan were the sameSubmitted by cathyngo1512 on
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