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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the output of the student's survey in five categories (Technical quality,
Print
resources
, Electronic
Resources
,
Range
 of
modules
 offered, and building
facilitities
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facilities
)
in
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on
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 a campus. The survey was taken in three different years (2000, 2005 and 2010) and the data is presented by
percentage
. In general, most categories showed an
increase
 from 2000 to 2010, except for
Range
 of Module Offer and Building Facilities.
Print
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The print
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 Resource category had the highest rating
percentage
while
Range
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the Range
show examples
 of
Modules
 was the lowest. From 2000 to 2005, Electronic
Resources
 showed a significant
increase
 of almost 30%,
while
Print
Resources
 experienced
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a slightly
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slightly
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slight
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increase
 from 87% to 89%.
Conversely
,
Technical
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the Technical
show examples
 resource and
Range
 of
Modules
 category experienced a decrease below 5%.
Moreover
, the rating of Building Facilities stayed
same
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the same
show examples
 with
total
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the total
a total
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percentage
 of 77%. From 2005 to 2010, Electronic
Resources
 and Technical
Resource
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Resources
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 had an
increase
 of around 8% and 6% each.
Otherwise
,
Print
Resources
 and
Range
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the Range
show examples
 of
Modules
 show a decrease of around 1
until
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to
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 3%. Meanwhile, the rating of Building Facilities still
stay
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stays
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same
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the same
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 as
2005
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in 2005
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, with
total
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the total
a total
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percentage
 of 77%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words print, resources, range, modules, percentage, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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