IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news, while others consider photographs to be irrefutable.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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With the advent of technology, a person can update themself with the current situations happening around the world through the medium of
news
agencies
. Most
news
 channels and newspapers testify their articles and stories by clubbing
pictures
 with
it
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them
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. Some individuals believe photographs to be unreliable,
whereas
 others vocalise by saying that adding
photograph
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a photograph
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 in an article ought to be
unquestionbly
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unquestionably
unquestionable
 mandatory. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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 adding misleading photographs to support written
information
 should be stopped. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both
the
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apply
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sides with suitable examples.
To begin
 with,
majority
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the majority
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 of individuals trust
news
agencies
 for their up-to-date and
legit
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legitimate
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information
. Adding
pictures
with
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to
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 the articles creates a deeper sense of empathy
plus
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and
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 increases the
viewers
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viewer's
viewers'
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 eagerness to watch or read the
news
.
However
,
rise
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the rise
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 and exploitation of
photoshop
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Photoshop
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 sites
creates
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create
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choas
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chaos
 amongst
populace
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the populace
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 for what is legit or what is not.
For instance
,
acoording
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according
 to a survey held in every
news
 agency, more than 25 per cent of the displayed photos were illegitimate and were solely posted to attract viewers
for watching
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to watch
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 their show or read the concerned article.
On the other hand
, clubbing
pictures
 with the respective
news
 article
provides
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allows
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 the reader/viewer to get a hold of the complete scenario. Most
of
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the
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news
agencies
 hire individuals who are particularly designated for clicking exact photos for the articles or
news
that is
 going to be published.
For example
, after taking a survey in an area, more than 70 per cent
people
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of people
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 agreed that amalgamation of
information
 with linked
pictures
help
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helps
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 them to understand and relate better than reading only text.
To sum up
, more and more
news
agencies
 will continue to club
information
 with supporting
pictures
. It's the
news
 organisation's to provide legit and original photos only so that the population does not feel misguided.
Submitted by mrigankingley2099 on

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