The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates the
score
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scores
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given out by students for several features
on
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in
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one university in a decade from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, each
aspects
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aspect
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show
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shows
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divergent trends
while
some show
an increases
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an increase
increases
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, others show decreases in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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year. It's clear that
on
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apply
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the print resources area has the best
score
of all, whilst
modules
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module
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variation has the least rating. Technical quality
got
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reached
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65 in 2000 and declined to 63 in 2005
,
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apply
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before it rose to 60 in 2010.
Moreover
, print resources had reached a peak at 89 in 2005 and slightly decreased
1
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by 1
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score
in 2010.
Electronic
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The electronic
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resources
area
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are
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received 45 in 2000 and significantly
rocket
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rocketed
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to 88 in ten years later.
Range
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The range
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of modules offered,
however
, had a pretty bad rate to start with in 2000 at 32. It stably
drop
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dropped
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to 30 in 2005 and
continue
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continued
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to decline
at
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to
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27 in 2010.
Nevertheless
, building and teaching facilities
prove
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proved
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the stability and had the exact same
score
for one decade at 77.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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