The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates the
score
given out by students for several features Fix the agreement mistake
scores
on
one university in a decade from 2000 to 2010.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, each aspects
Change to a singular noun
aspect
show
divergent trends Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
while
some show an increases
, others show decreases in Correct the article-noun agreement
an increase
increases
upcoming
year. It's clear that Add an article
the upcoming
on
the print resources area has the best Change preposition
apply
score
of all, whilst modules
variation has the least rating.
Technical quality Change the noun form
module
got
65 in 2000 and declined to 63 in 2005Verb problem
reached
,
before it rose to 60 in 2010. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, print resources had reached a peak at 89 in 2005 and slightly decreased 1
Change preposition
by 1
score
in 2010. Electronic
resources Correct article usage
The electronic
area
received 45 in 2000 and significantly Correct your spelling
are
rocket
to 88 in ten years later.
Wrong verb form
rocketed
Range
of modules offered, Correct article usage
The range
however
, had a pretty bad rate to start with in 2000 at 32. It stably drop
to 30 in 2005 and Wrong verb form
dropped
continue
to decline Wrong verb form
continued
at
27 in 2010. Change preposition
to
Nevertheless
, building and teaching facilities prove
the stability and had the exact same Wrong verb form
proved
score
for one decade at 77.Submitted by matcha on
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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