The two diagrams illustrate the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it ascends and descends in flight. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are
two
pictures that illustrate how an air
balloon
ascends and descends depending on its structure.
The air
balloon
is constructed with a balloon
envelope
hanging a blanket for passengers. In the blanket, two
gas tanks are put on the floor linked burners at the junction of the envelope
and the blanket. Besides
, there is a valve
cord inside the envelope
connected to the valve
on the top of the envelope
.
When the air
balloon
ascends, the valves of two
gas tanks are opened and the valve
on the envelope
is closed. With burners opened, the envelope
will expand because hot air
is blown into it, pulling the air
balloon
to the sky. By contrast
, when the air
balloon
descends, two
gas tanks and burners are closed, and a person pulls the valve
cord to open the valve
on the top so hot air
will be released through it. As a result
, the air
balloon
will lose the force to rise and back to the land.
Overall
, the air
balloon
is a complex machine and its movement is predominantly decided by the quantity of hot air
in its envelope
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