Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs provide information about how the proportion of qualifications in a particular nation shifted between 1980 and 2008.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the percentage of people who held
Master
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of
Arts
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,
PhD
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of
Arts
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and
PhD
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of
Science
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; with
PhD
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of
Science
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witnessing a dramatic rise.
In addition
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, the figures for the First degree of
Arts
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and
Science
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saw a decline,
while
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those for the
master
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of
science
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remained the same throughout the period. 25% of certificates obtained in
this
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country were First Degree of
Arts
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in 1980, followed by a significant tumble to 11% in 2008.
Similarly
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, the number of residents gaining a First degree in
Science
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was 19% at the beginning of the interval examined,
then
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approximately halved to 10% after 28 years.
PhD
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of
Science
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accounted for 13% in 1980, after which it experienced a sharp growth to 30% and surpassed the figure for
Master
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of
Science
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to become the most popular diploma issued in 2008. A homogeneous trend, but to a lesser extent, can be seen in the percentage of
Master
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of
Arts
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and
PhD
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of
Arts
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, which started at 12% and 3% before reaching 13% and 7% in that order.
Conversely
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, the amount of
Master
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of
Science
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was unchanged over nearly three decades, keeping consistently at 29%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words master, arts, phd, science with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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